[Noisebridge-discuss] Dish washing.

[Jason Dusek]

2009/08/14 Christoph Maier <cm.hardware.software.elsewhere at gmail.com>:
> On Fri, 2009-08-14 at 00:02 -0700, Jason Dusek wrote:
> > 2009/08/13 Christoph Maier <cm.hardware.software.elsewhere at gmail.com>:
> > > ... albeit altogether absent of alliterations.  Didn't you
> > > write in hexameters?
> >
> > My verses are all alliterative. They're not hexameter. Are the
> > alliterations unclear?
>
> The alliterations are conspicuously absent.

  Are you sure?

    |D|ave Kelso, un|d|aunted by flies // washed all the |d|ishes this evening.
    In settling this long u|n|met |n|eed // is there not ho|n|our,
|N|oisebridge?
    An au|th|entic offer, sans selfish |th|ought // for which I offer |th|anks.
    U|nn|amed and u|nkn|own are those // who've before |n|ow cleared the sink.
    |R|ather, we should |r|emind ourselves // and, perhaps, |r|eprove ourselves.

  It's not the first letter of a word that counts -- it's the
  first stressed consonant.

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Jason Dusek